Reviews For A Boy, his Wife to be and his Mistress
Reviewer: Fairfield (Signed) · Date: 23 Nov 2007 12:22 pm · On: A Boy, his Wife to be and his Mistress
Okay, a portrayal of two people escaping from their perfect lives where the demands on them are high and they have little freedom of choice. I keep thinking, however, that their relationship will have more of an effect on them than this story shows.
Author's Response: Of course it would. This one-shot is showing how it got started and the fact that neither person wants to stop. Given the situation, I guess you could call it that 'romance period', however, there isn't anything romantic about it. I have been asked to write another one-shot showing the effect it does have on them...*shrugs*...I may or may not :) Thank you for the review though.
Reviewer: Airlady (Signed) · Date: 05 Aug 2007 05:10 pm · On: A Boy, his Wife to be and his Mistress
This is a very thoughtful way to show the emotions of two people in a terrible bind.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Thoughtful, but underdeveloped as far as emotion goes. Its just one part or side of it though.