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Categories: General
Characters: Draco Malfoy
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild Sexual Content
Series: 2006 Christmas Exchange
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 5477 Read Count: 125

Banner made by Cache Dae, modified by me. An accident in Potion's class sends Hermione Granger hurdling through time. She meets the Marauders, Lily Evans and Severus Snape. Things aren't always as they appear and love comes in many different forms. Follow Hermione's adventure, through trials and time turning, as she discovers that changing things in the past draws severe consequences in the future.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, James Potter, Lily Evans Potter, Peter Pettigrew, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape, Sirius Black
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, AU, Romance
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: No Word count: 20735 Read Count: 586
Hey Jessi :) I printed this out to read in the car, at the in-laws today. But re-reading this has got me hooked again ;)
I still love the break-up scene, its sad, but funny all at the same time. The 'Whoopsie' always makes me laugh, without fail.
I loved Ginny's reaction to, I think I'd want to strangle anyone who calls Ron 'Won Won'...It reminds me of Won Ton Noodles...lol..
Anyway dear, it was fantastic to read this again and can't wait for more...although I will review chapters 2 and 3 too :) *huggles*
I love your Dumbledore in this story. He's in character, but in his humourous way. Its like he all knowing, but not angry or concerned, but more amused by the situation.
The interaction with the Maruaders is just fantastic too, I had to laugh when Hermione was explaininmg SPEW...lol..too good!!!
Explaining how Hermione knew so much about them was fantastic, but sad at the same time. It made Hermione look like a 'little miss know it all', but on a sad tone.
Same when she was explaining the things the Harry, Ron and she got up to in their years togerher, I loved how they were all listening in, hanging off every word, especially Sirius. Because I know this story though, I was already saying "Awww" and had a few tears in my eyes.
As always, you are fabulous at writing and I love this story :)
The kisses in the last chapter just made me go "Awww", but again, I know what happens so its hard for me to contain what I really want to say.
I love your Sev, he just about right to me, I think. I loved his reactions to Hermione's potion making skills, though, little does he know that is because she knows about Sev's book.
The library scene was just as good..lol..Typical for him to put his foot in his mouth, but I did love Hermione's reaction, but was she really thinking him to be any different?
The James and Sirius fight was fantastic :) James so deserved what he got but I kinda was going for both of them...James is just sooo sweet and Sirius is just a God! So lucky Hermione, huh?
LOL...I totally forgot about the Lily/Sirius kiss...Well, really, Sirius kissed Lily, but still...It still shows James's real feelings. He may be attracted to Hermione, but his heart does love Lily...Which only make things more difficult to understand things further on...Hmmmm
Okay..Update...I'm resisting reading on at the other site, sooooo UPDATE *grins and huggles*
Categories: General
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lord Voldemort, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 838 Read Count: 181
G'day :) Just thought I'd wonder over here and check out your stories. I like the concept of this story, an interesting way to see the end of both Harry and Voldemort. I think it was chilling, but with a bit more description, I think it could have been a bit more thrilling and suspenceful.
But overall, I really did enjoy the little twist you put in and trust Hermione to find the logic in it all and sucked in to old Voldy for being tricked into death :)
Author's Response: The challenge was to write the last page of the last book, I get your point about the description, but as you can see, I was well over a page already. I love writing to challenges, but I rarely manage to stick to them

Categories: Action/Adventure
Characters: Alastor Moody, Albus Dumbledore, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Frank Longbottom, Hagrid, Horace Slughorn, James Potter, Lily Evans Potter, Lord Voldemort, Minerva McGonagall, Moaning Myrtle, Narcissa Malfoy, Peter Pettigrew, Regulus Black, Remus Lupin, Severus Snape, Sirius Black
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Historical
Warnings: None
Series: The Harry Potter Tribute to Cliches
Chapters: 5
Completed: No Word count: 11826 Read Count: 525
I realky enjoyed this chapter. The interaction between Draco and McGonagall was very amusing, a very different take on how Minerva would speak to and about a student.
I thought Draco was very quick witted with his comebacks and laughed about the “You bet your sweet bippy, he is.” :) I also thought that Dumbledore was very well done. I dunno how he knows about Draco, but I think that's the best thing about ol' Dumbleydore...He's the man who knows everythin.
Okay, so...Draco being mates with the Marauders??...LOL...Now THIS should be interesting!! I can't wait for the next installment :)
Author's Response: I\'m really trying to make things as silly and out there as possible. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying this, and as promised, the next installment should be up now.
Okay, I'm finally here :) At first I was going to go straight past this story, but Draco caught my eye. Then I saw the girl in the banner and didn't recognise her and then did go past this story. Then, I went back, cause Draco was on my mind and I read the summery. So, just from that, I had to read...lol..
Yes, I'm one of those sick people who adore time travel stories, but for Draco to go back in time and meet Lily?? I'm hooked. This first chapter set the scene up great :) 23 turned to 32..lol..That reminds me of me...I'd do that without being told what to do ;) I really enjoyed this first chapter and now onto the next.
Author's Response: You\'ll recognize her a little better after the new movie, I suspect. I thought she looked a bit too much like Emma Watson to be Lily. I wrote a timeturner story once years ago, and it was a complete disaster. We\'re all just trying to have a bit of fun with some of the major cliches that seem to get recycled again and again, so there will probably be about half a dozen of them throughout the story, if not more. Thanks so much for reading. :)
Have you ever had a 'fan girl' review before? Well, your about to get one..lol..
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!..I'm literally bouncing in my seat with excitement and anticipation :) I really liked the conversation with Lily and Alice, it made me grin...
NEVER have I ever seen James and Sirius as bullies, but in this chapter, that is all I thought. Even though they really are like that, especially with Snape, I always still saw them as the 'good guys', but this chapter made me hate them...Noot hate, hate, but how I would feel if I read a scene where Draco was picking on Harry.
This is just sooo different though, this time its Draco going back into the past and meeting the Marauders and their year, but what really made me gasp and almost choke on my dinner was Draco speaking to Narcissa. I was actually saying.."Aww, that's your mum!"...Hubby looked at me strangly, but what can ya do??
So, I know I have another chapter to read, but I'm going to *blork* and *poke* you now to update!! I really MUST know what happens and I'm sure my next review will be more of this!
Author's Response: I am hoping to get a chance to update this weekend. I\'ve been working diligently on my original fic, Goblin Market, and tweeking a few bits of the chapter I just finished, so when I\'m done with that, I promised myself I would indulge in tormenting poor Draco.\r\n\r\nI love \"fan girl\" reviews, so HUZZAH~\r\n\r\nAs for James and Sirius as bullies, it\'s odd, but I\'ve always been more inclined to lean away from Harry\'s perspective because it\'s so jaded. It\'s like even after seeing what horrors Snape suffered at the hands of his father and godfather, he had no sympathy, and I totally believe that was Rowling\'s doing. She does not want us to see any good or feel sorry for Severus Snape. Nearly ever story I have ever written about the Marauders has put James and Sirius in their rightful place as bullies. Draco should fit in with them right square! Or maybe they\'ll be like vinnegar and water. :)\r\n\r\nThanks so much for the great review! :)
For a cliched story, I'm loving it!! Though, I do love cliches, so go figure :)
So much to say and not knowing where to start. In the last chapter, I had a thought..and I said to myself, 'Nah, never going to happen'...Then I read on, only to find that yes, Narcissa is attracted to draco..lol..But really, it fits!! She does fall in love with Lucius, so why not Draco who is supposed to be like his father??
But what really got me excited..yes, excited was his thoughts of Ginny as he caught a glimpse of Lily..I was like "yes! send him back to his present time and sweep lil' Ginny off her feet!!" That would seriously make my day!! hahaha
Then OMG! <---- Yes, it had to be done ;) He was placed into Gryffindor!!...lol..I did love his protests, very much a Draco response, but yay!! I can see him placed in that house and I loved the Sorting Hat too. How it talked to him, much like it spoke to Harry. And Dumbledore!! hahaha..Not much EVER goes past him, does it??
Over all, I love it..I really do...I told ya I'd find a favourite, and here one is...PLEASE update!!...PLEASE!!!...*grins, pokes and grins again*
Author's Response: I am very excited about this story. All of our staff are working on cliched stories to celebrate HP, and we\'ve had some good ones so far. I sort of miss writing HP Fanfic sometimes, so this gave me a chance to play in the familiar genre again. Now, you know I had to make Narcissa like him. :D It\'s a back to the future twist, and one of the horrid cliches I used to come across in the queue at the other site was Harry gone back in time where Lily falls in love with him because he\'s cute like James, but everything James is not. I think I might add a chapter where Draco actually meets his father because Lucius is jealous... that would be horribly silly, but oh so much fun! I love Draco/Ginny, so I may just end it like that. I\'m so glad you enjoy this so far. Like I said in my last reply, I hope to have an update this weekend! Thanks so much for reading!
I read this last night, but was too tired to review..lol..sorry about that!
I liked how Draco seemed intrigued by Lily, I still can't help but think that once Draco gets back to his time, that he'll start seeing Ginny in a new light..lol..
I had to giggle about Narcissa though..But good save by Draco..lol..I feel that was with guys that have the same name as my dad! Could never date one of them, cause I felt like I was talking to my dad and that's just gross!!
I also enjoyed Draco's slip of the tongue “Probably had a meeting with You-Know-Who,” It almost makes me wish he would tell them..warn them and maybe change the way the future goes.
Ahhhh, Snape. After DH, I have a new respect for him. Still love him, but I respect him more. Happy to see he's going to try and help Draco, although his questioning was amusing. I could see a young Snape not believing Draco, as an older one would. But Draco told him an awful lot...I suppose he has to though to get snape to help him the way he needs help.
Good chapter, I hope you have time to update again :)
Author's Response: I\'m not sure how I feel about updating after DH now. Reading the book took a lot out of my enthusiasm out of writing fanfiction for the time being, and I will probably just focus on original work for awhile. Sorry. I hate to think I\'ve disappointed anyone, and I do really enjoy hearing from you.

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